Needs a lot (And I mean alot) of work...
1) You had no X on it (At least not for XP or Vista).
2) Boring Dreary voices. I know you tried but it's just friggin' boring...
3) To be continued?! At you trying?! No offense but if you want 10th or higher it's gotta be full length no to be continued to come out in Feburary man.
I know my review seems harsh but you have to amuse me (The Audience) and you just didn't pull it off....
Better luck next time, animation is superb, story, voices and pacing need to be addressed, BADLY.