a few suggestions
well, i kinda gree with the fact that this was not what i expected at all. a bit strange at times, somtimes a bit freaky, but it could be improved. what i could suggest (not that im trying to be mean about your work because im not) is that you should first think about how you want the finished flash movie to be, and then try to get a plot for the movie written or drawn. then turn it into a movie which relates to the original plot. that way you'll know if it turned out the way you wanted or not. if it does not, then just re-write the plot to the way that you want it, and switch around parts of the flash movie to make it the way you want. ok? but anyways, not bad if i must say so myself. but when you do your author's comments for the movie, try not to be so......mean about it. like the nuke part, thats pretty darn mean. but still, not bad of a movie for the flash portal. keep it up, but try not to be so mean about it, allright?