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Reviews for "CandyHolics"

Hahaha. Cool.

Good Points:

The voices were good, very clear and suited the characters. The idea was pretty decent aswell, and it had a few funny jokes and refrences in there. The lip synching was perfect too :)

Bad Points:

The actual animation was pretty bad, meaning the movement of the characters was pretty jerky. Putting some tweens in there would have helped a lot or atleast a frame between the two movements would make it a whole deal better and smoother.

Overall:

It was enjoyable to watch. I can see you've put a lot of effort into this and it's payed off. I'm going to go check out your other stuff now.

PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks, I am trying to improve on making my animations smoother, but thanks for the review and the criticism. I'll try adding more tween to see if that smooth things out. Thank you for the review.

Funny..

Good jokes, pretty good graphics and good sounds.

Btw, having a Tank man costume would be awesome

7/10

PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks

Alright

The first thing I must say is the cursor is annoying for the main flash part, a smaller one would have been better and the menu could do with a little work, though it does do it's job. As for the main flash itself, some of the animation is okay and other bits a little jerky, some pretty decent graphics and story.

The voice acting is pretty good too, although some of it is a little crackly, so that could be worked on and the parts where text shows is too fast, fade it out at times maybe. Overall though, a pretty decent flash, it's the story that counts more than anything.

3/5

<3

= Review Request Club =

PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks for the review.

meh

it was decent but the animation has to be WAAAAY smoother

Amusing, but has some technical problems.

I really liked the basic plot and it was cool seeing Wonchop, Tankman, Blockhead etc.

It seemed like a bit love-fest for NG-media and it all worked well.

It sounds as if you were a bit too close to your mic at times - there was a bit of noise, specially when you raised your voice. Maybe hold it at arm's length when you're shouting, then raise the volume in Audacity or whatever audio program?

The 'replay' button doesn't work. There was a slight mistake when you put 'collection' and 'opps' instead of 'collect' and 'oops' in the subtitles. Sometimes, the background shading appeared on top of the foreground characters. Be more careful.

Annoyingly, half-way through the movie, the custom cursor appeared in the middle of the screen during the first screen. Don't bother with custom cursors in a movie.

I wasn't too keen n the drawings of the basic characters, but I liked the fact that you had shading and I liked the tankman drawings, as well as som other elements.

Overall, I felt there were a bunch of technical problems that sorta got in the way of the experience, but it remained a funny, amusing movie.

Keep up the cool work, but next time maybe take a little more care.

.:review Request Club:.

PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks, I'll do some more testing and fixing problems before releasing the movie. Thanks you for your review. Appreciate it.

+Hylian-Mafia+