ah...uhm.......
first of all i must say never drink, compose, and post... at least with out waiting till your sober to go back over it.
now on to the song itself. i felt that this is really poor work on your part while give you credit for creating it( which is more than i can do), i cant say that this is up to par with all of your other peices.
the music itself is simplistic and vaguely dynamic, while the lyrics and tone of the words themselfs make me cringe. the lyrics themselfs are fine but leave me disapointed that there isnt more metaphorically to it(like most if not all of your other songs)
over this, while an ok song, i can't say is one of your better songs.