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Reviews for "Cosmos Chaos"

An okay tale...

Your animation could use some work... I find it a little odd that you can draw some things so well like hands, difficult poses and amazing backgrounds but you fail when it comes to drawing humans correctly... especially after drawing/animating some rather original beasts.

I also give this movie cudos for being able to tell a story without dialog or sound effects. It's one of the hardest things to do in animation, especially when it comes to timing things correctly to the music...

Speaking of. I have to partially agree with BlazeEagle about how annoying it is. It was alright for what you were using but it was far too high pitched to be a pleasure to the ears... There's some other faults with the music but they're rather hard to explain. All I can say simply is that I didn't like it.

The last complaint I have is the somewhat predictable story line. I know some like to see a scene and watch how it happened but that only works when you interupt that final scene with the story. Seeing the final end result, ruins the rest of the film. *COUGHPANSLABYRINTHCOUGH*

zeedox responds:

Your criticism has some very good points that I find helpful, so I greatly appreciate your review! Thanks!

Wasn't that good

The story was predictable, the animation wasn't that good (joints or lack of), and the monster was generic (generic alien dragon #1901938 and tentacle monster #1928309).

A Whole New World.

Not much is going on in this flash. It has a sparse plot, some mediocre graphics, and a song which kind of compliments the action. Why does it get as high as a six of ten? Because it does a good job of transplanting the viewer to the exotic world portrayed in the flash.
The graphics suffered in some areas, which is a shame because the visual imagery is really the selling point of this flash. Character drawings and animations were awkward at some points, such as when one of the astronauts swims to the surface. The two astronauts were the worst in this respect, as at some points they did not have realistic anatomies or body movements. Most of the monsters were pretty cool and some of the best parts of the flash. I was particularly impressed by the monkey and the colorful plants. The animator did a good job of conveying a mostly sparse planet with occassional outcroppings of colorful life. Scenes where an astronaut was racing through barren, dusty canyons were combined well with a couple of frames of pink birds flying into the air. The animation had a good grip of fantasy and imagination, which I can appreciate.
I was pretty excited when when the authors description said "to the song by Jazza." When I think of flashes like this being set to songs, I think of stuff like Future by Celarent, where the action of the flash is synched up to the music. A continually flashing light might follow the beat of a bass drum, and as the intensity of the music increases so might to pace of the animation. This flash did some of that, but not as well as I'd like. If you can pull this effect off, it becomes really cool.
The plot was underdeveloped, and there should have been less of it. As it stands, I figure that life was found on this remote planet, and adventurers go to explore it, after being forced to crash land. For a flash like this, even that is too much of a story, and the authors main focus should be depicting a bare-bones story in the most aestetically appealing way possible. Early scenes of newspapers and city life, although short, were extraneous and should have been cut.
Definitely room for improvement, but this is a solid foray into the, albiet overpopulated, realm of music-video type flashes. Stick at it.

wow

those monsters were amazing, they could break right through the ship and make it fall apart, but the planet which should be sooo much tougher couldn't kill the ship when the ship falls from space and crashes into it...

- makes no sense, along with the rest, oh well...

I didn't like it

I thought the two human character designs and animation were really dull and they were just like rag dolls through the whole thing. Their arms just kind of flopped around instead of moving like an actual human.

There was hardly any story besides a few newspaper articles. I didn't like the animation either.

The creature designs were creative, but I don't see why you couldn't make the humans move more human-like when you made the creatures move creature-like. That didn't make sense to me. The music suited it well though.