Here I am, yet again.
Apparently I was absolutely cruel and unusual in my last post. (Woo hoo! I pissed people off!) But I'll try and be more constructive because I'm not entirely heartless.
This one was a little better than the others because the camera wasn't really annoying. However, there are some hits and misses:
Hit: You guys are comfortable in front of the camera and it shows.
Hit: The camera is used effectively. (I know what's going on, though it's rediculous.)
Miss: Acting is mediocre.
Miss: No engaging plot or storyling.
Miss: Color changes didn't contribute to the video.
Miss: Poor logical thinking for the characters. This gives me nothing I can relate to. (You guys aren't down to Earth.)
Miss: Minute amount of characters. (Two to three and maybe "rob") This might work for maybe a rant like Foamy, but not this kind of series.
MISS: NO SIGNIFICANT FLASH
Suggestions: If you submitting stuff to newgrounds, make it a flash. Your submissions are continually taking the place of actual flash artists on the front page. It's insulting to them as it is insulting to the newgrounds public (Whether they or you realize it or not.)
As a video, it isn't something I could find myself watching twice or recommending to friends but it isn't absolutely atrocious either. (It's stupid, but not poorly made.) Three things would hugely change my outlook on this series:
1.) Improve acting.
2.) Improve script
3.) Bring in other characters.
Now, my final word is this: This is a "flash" site, not a video site. No matter how well you do here, i will always blam it because it's not suppose to be here.