Meh.
Althoguh collabs tend to be well done overall, when worked on they also tend to have the problems of the individual artists. It just seemed ike a lot of it was unorginal, and unentertaning. I commend you for using black and white, that was definatley orginal, but the rest just seemed kinda "okay" Overall I would say this submission isnt bad, but its nothing special. You definatley deserve the front page though.