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im not sure anyone knows what your style was going for but it was uhh...how you say....pointless? well you sure did exceed in the strange department.
Reviews for "A Short Walk"
Hah, you guys didn't get it?
This was a phantastic 4 promo! I don't know where Jonny was, but you had the Thing, Susan, and Mr Fantastic himself. The cigarette was out of context, but it gives his character more depth. Kinduh like, if Susan was taking birth control pills, and the Thing was getting high snuffing concrete. Creepy, yes... Intersting art
Don't try to be so "artsy"
You know those weird little emo-ish art students that will walk into a class with a blank canvas, a single black spot in the middle, play some cassette of nails on a chalkboard... name the piece "My Soul" and call it "art?"
This is like that, except worse, because... if you were at least trying to make some sort of statement, then what the hell was it? The only statement I see is that you don't know how to hold a cigarette.
That said, you both demonstrated that you have a good grasp of making something "creepy" - as the style of "art" itself had an awkward feel, along with the music. Also, you seem to be able to properly compose a piece in Flash and the sound quality was good... so, try again.
This is just a study......
Much like alot of things that don't have a story on here. It provided atmosphere, but it was shallow as hell. I couldn't dig my teeth into that and for that you suck at story telling. Not only that, but like most have said WTF? You not only didn't have story telling, but reached a new low without something entertaining about it. Good atmosphere, but it's not applied anywhere. It's not used, it's wasted memory, wasted potential, but you don't look like you tried that hard on a story here, so you didn't get my expectations up. It's a sad excuse that it's on the front page, it just is.
Dude just put this into a story of some kind and actually give Newgrounds YOU'RE best regardless if you think you'll be the next huge hit. And if you think you will, own up to it, and make a decent flash, prove yourself, or else I'd rather you be left behind.
I love this!
I love this, I don't know why.
It's so surreal, but so real at the same time.
Great use of the art and music, it really fit in.