eh, it was alright
Work on the story a little, I don't like the "unexplainable" parts that are so frequent. And because this concept has done a million times, you'd really have to do something special for this to get any recognition. Good luck!
eh, it was alright
Work on the story a little, I don't like the "unexplainable" parts that are so frequent. And because this concept has done a million times, you'd really have to do something special for this to get any recognition. Good luck!