err no
this isnt better than lillium it just feels like a cheap knock off.
The art was there pretty much but it was clouded in too much lame symbolism. Try actually showing some nasty rather than showing a flower that is bleeding. Symbolism only works as a scare tactic when it surprises you as your brain takes a few seconds to realize what it means. This was just blatant and dull.
Try adding a more complex story.
gimme a
gimme a 'c'
gimme a 'e'
gimma a 'e'
gimmy a 'p'
gimmy a 'y'
what does that spell
CREEPY
Gothic city!
You did it Goth boy! You pulled it off!
Other then your maxed out green meter of Sanity.
Tugging your insides outwards into the giant moon of blue fire.
Harsh to say you have no life, a lie to say that I worship you.
Goth behavoir has nothing to do with emos.
They have a unusual thought on living things and pictures and have a hobby of looking different.
Emos are normal people like you an I but when pushed to the limit, can take up drastic measures... like commiting suicide don't laugh suicide is not funny.
Prrrffffpppph!! HA HA HA!! LOL!
And not only am I saying this because it needs to be said, I'm saying this because nothing on this Site is based on anyones votes.
You gotta ask ya self, Do you really qualify for the job as a online author?
The older NG design had reveiws where you could vote a score on Humor, Graphics, Violence, and ofcourse the overall score.
So I'll make my own scoring.
Stero-type voice acting: 10/10
The colour black: 10/10
Exotic regions and refrences: It's over nine thousand!!!!
You see where I'm getting at?
Probabley not my comment at the start isn't what I'm feeling at the end.
Lets stop talking.
too goth/emo for my tastes
animation was pretty good but it is too goth/emo for me but its better than the piles of shit that i reviewed today
creepy
couldn't watch it all because I thought that satan was gonna jump out of my computer if I kept watching it. Good graphics though