Pretty cool short.
It's cool it managed to get into the Halloween collection, too. :D It's weird, I've never actually seen a movie or anything else regarding the Bloody Mary Legend. You did a pretty good job... it didn't really creep me out much, but that's really just because it's hard to scare me. I've seen 'em all. =p
Still, great job... hope to see more from you in the future. Does Dave die? =O
Dave's my name...creepy.
4/5