great!
make it in to a full movie please! love it
great!
make it in to a full movie please! love it
Can be better.
You have the potential, you just need to put more time into those crucial effects, and overall put in more time to edit and smooth the movements.
And this needs to be longer, it ended too abruptly, if this was maybe 50 seconds long atleast, it could have gotten a much better score.
4/5
This is actually a decent submission. Change the title.
If this was a "test", I'm looking forward to actual submissions.