I kinda liked it
I think you just need a better script and voice acting, the animation bits were fine tbh..
Reviews for "Clayground - Actually"
BlakTornado responds:
The only reason the story for this one sucked is because I didn't really have anything to work with beforehand except a little note I jotted down a day or two earlier. Typically, it's this one that gets put on the front page, haha. I'm not complaining, I'm REALLY grateful to Tom for his support but it HAD to be one that wasn't that great, haha.
Foreign, and thus interesting.
This certainly does look a lot like Knox's work, but that doesn't bother me. I copy my favorite artists all the time, too.
I'm not used to seeing clay fellas with an accent (I don't have an accent, damn you!), so I may have inadvertently chuckled when they said the word "karate". Your animation seems to work for the simple things you want to accomplish, but I'd like to see just how much you're willing to push the media in the future.
Good luck, and don't pay attention to the nay-sayers. Even if you're borrowing ideas directly from existing sources your own unique style will surface eventually. I'm a patiant man, but don't disappoint.
yeah
It's alot like Klayworld only not funny at all. and on a a much more budgety scale... sorry guys but it just don't work
BlakTornado responds:
The main reason the story for this one sucked is because I didn't really have anything to work with beforehand except a little note I jotted down a day or two earlier. Typically, it's this one that gets put on the front page, haha. I'm not complaining, I'm REALLY grateful to Tom for his support but it HAD to be one that wasn't that great, haha.
that kinda blew
i guess i'm used to seeing actually funny claymation around on newgrounds.. (knox or whoever) this was just meh. all you have going is pretty clean animation, but not very good actual models, and pretty lame script. it was irritating at best.
LOLOLOLOLOL
ROFL.. loved it! brilliant.. ricky the rock.. classic!