A shame...
that your flash thing expired, since this seemed like a really interesting series, and considering I havent gotten far in my own... lol, quite an achievement in just 30 days!
Reviews for "//Sacrafice.1"
Perriwinkle responds:
Yeah i know. I really rushed the last two scenes.
I would like to see your series.
Thank you for the review.
//Perriwinkle
Oh wow
Oh wow man....This is...very very very nice. I likey. Kind of lackluster in the very beginning.,..but after that..wow, great use of filters btw. I hope to be near this level soon...just started animating, and I wanna be just wiiike yuuu! *ahem* 5/5*, 10/10 because of the well done drama.
Perriwinkle responds:
Lol. Skill + Effort + Time = Greatness. I learned that if you bust your ass in one of them (time) then you can lack in another (skill). I should quote that :D
//Perriwinkle
hmmmm... potential, yes.
the style is definately eye popping, fast paced with alot of emotion thrown in, which all fits well with the background music. Frame by frame is never easy, but its what made this flash seem so fluent in nature. The only "problem", would be that it doesnt quite have the detail in it, i see what your going for art-wise, but i think that it would be better if you either went with something more simple, or totally go deep into the detail with the art style you've already used here. Regardless on whether you change anything at all with your style, i would find it nice to continue going farther into this story you've come up with.
Basically what im saying is, get that dam flash program. Like i said, as long as you keep up with it and never stop, you will not only entertain so many people, but get even better in the process. And when i say better, i mean specifically in the art department (and maybe a bit smoother movement..)
And by the way, im critiquing this professionally, so im sorry if any of this advice offends you. bottom line though, get the program, and keep going with it.
-[10/10]/[5/5]-
-eVo121
DAMNIT!!
dangit... that movie was good, but why can't you just buy flash? it isn't that expensive....is it..? anyway if you do continue this project I suggest you improve the animations and put subtitles instead of chat slides, that will make it even more awsome if you continue this movie
Perriwinkle responds:
Flash CS3 costs around 600$. Not really pocketchange. I might as well buy a whole nother laptop for that amount.
Subtitles, i considered it. But i thought it would be too much going on. I was gonna add voice + subtitle, but i had no microphone, and i didn't have any worth to my name so asking others to volunteer wouldn't work out.
shame your trial expired :(
because you had some good stuff going on there.
i suggest you splurge for the full version (or obtain it through illicit means, if that's your thing)
either way, it'd be a shame if we never saw anything from you again.
Perriwinkle responds:
Naughty, naughty =3
It's not like I haven't downloaded every single program with the word "Flash" attached to it, and found out they were all trojans.
Thanks for the review.
//Perriwinkle