wowzers..
they say don't give non-constructive comments but come on now... you could have done better than that.
Reviews for "Turtle Park Massacre"
Didn't really make sense...
All in all I see what you were going for, just craziness or whatever and random violence, but really it went too far for no reason at all. also the animation was completly lacking, although for a first try it wasn't too bad.
Pretty Bad. . .
I'm sorry, but that was just plain boring. The animation was mediocre as well. If you're going to take the time to make a flash out of something, at least also take the time to think up something interesting. I can't think of many flash cartoons that are duller than this.
Not cool.
Murdering in cold blood for minor slights ? Sorry. That simply isn't the way things are done. No one conciously did anything to slight the protagonist in the least. Disgusting. Im sure if he had just talked to the kid's dad like a reasonable being he could have gotten not only another sandwich, he might get a better one with maybe a bag of chips as a token of apology. Neither scenario seemed a justification for lethal force. Maybe if the protagonist was going up against criminals or terrorists for killing a loved one, you might have something there. But a sandwich and potato salad? That just comes across as lame.
And the "Massacre" was rather lethargic and uninspired. At least the Insanity series put some vigor and creativity in it's mayhem. If you gotta have someone go on a rampage, you need to be more like that series. Just standing there and bludgeoning people doesnt count as much of a rampage. Bring something new to the table. A turtle anti-hero could have something going for it.
The only plus in this short's favor is the music. Otherwise better luck next time.
metallica41 responds:
Alright, thanks for the comments
hmmm
funny concept, good drawing, great voice work and sound, TERRIBLE ANIMATION!
The animation was reeeaaalllyyy lacking but the rest of it was well done.
metallica41 responds:
I'm trying to improve on animating