Reviews for Turtle Park Massacre

[Lesbian-Waffles]

Good first attempt, but needs improvement

The graphics were very decent, I specifically like the grayed out blood splatter parts. However the two issues driving this one down were two things:

1. Story...I was very bored. Nothing much happened despite some very funny dialog and great voice acting. A story is the single most important aspect of any animation - "Pixar".

2. Animation. You can draw, but your animation is very weak. Really think about how a character would move, react, etc... Also look up what secondary motion is. Animating well is even more important than good art (example XIAO XIAO has no aspect of good art, yet holds it's own simply by amazing animation).

metallica41 responds:

Thanks for the tips

[MrNG]

meh...

Don't know what to say. The sound was good definetely but the animation was ok considering it was your first. I think you can do a lot better.

[Blackdragon27]

Hmmm

The sound was good, and it looked nice, but the storyline was stupid. The guy killed a kid over a sandwich and kills his father because he forgot the egg salad. I like mindless violence, it can be pretty funny. But this was semi-mindless, between the line of a fair revenge and a mindless slaughter, and i'm not a fan the that catagory inbetween, so 4/10.

[slaughterjockey77]

Shit

the only reason I give this any points is for the sound of the rain in the preloader

metallica41 responds:

lol alright

thanks

[skullsword]

cool, cool

this is'nt bad, violence is always a awsome laughing sensation and killing sprees are cool (even short one's!)