Nice
-Good-
This was a very well done flash. I doubt this is your first flash animation. The graphics and animation were nice and the song was enjoyable. Very well done here.
-Bad-
Well, I didn't really like the blur effect you added to the motion. I think it might have looked better without it. Second, it would of looked better if you drew you own lines when the girl was falling.
-Overall-
A good flash
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Thanks for your review.
I did draw those lines when she was falling. I wanted to create some kind of blur effect to make it look like the ground was approaching. In attempt to achieve that illusion I drew the lines in Flash, imported it to Photoshop, converted it to bitmap, and then imported it back to Flash. In retrospect, I see it as a mistake and there are probably alternatives to creating the effect that I desired.
Also, yes, this was not the first flash animation I ever made. I did create a number of practice animations beforehand, but nothing as complete as this.
Evocative
A very well choosed song, a short movie, a nice experimental movie, a lyric submission, still needs some improvement like the human drawing, you should train to draw people better, in rest good, especcialy for a first submission, still work. ^_^
Thanks for the review.
While I agree that I do need to improve drawing human anatomy, I never intended for the figures in this cartoon to be realistic drawn.
huh?
I dont get it. but the animation was fine, and I really liked the music, so you get a 7/4. could be a little longer.
Yes, it is short. I may make another animation to tell the other parts of that dream.
a dream huh?
Reminds me of an LSD story where a young man on acid thought he could fly...
The animation is not bad. The gray background seems to give it that distortion of dreamlike quality and what reminded me most of that LSD story was the pattern when she jumped. Not bad, I liked it.
Thank you. Though, I can assure you, no drugs were involved in the making of this.
cute
gotta like these shorts that have a bit of cryptic ending
I can see the colorless characters and grey shades were a design choice.
overall it was cute.
the only thing you might want to remember, is that if you are gonna import a bitmap into flash, make sure it's HUGE so when you zoom in, it doesn't get all pixxely.
Of course for all I know, that might have been intentional.
good day!
Thanks a bunch for reviewing, Zekey. Means a lot to me. =)