Ummmm
I'm not sure what to make of this. In parts its really good, fine rhythm, the notes compliment well and its great. But in other places it just veers off and sounds rather offtune. I think it's all the um backing noise to go with the main tune. That and the fading in/out of the music was rather a miss. And the ending was odd, very odd.
Really liked the first part up to 1:15.
From 1:15 to 2:07 I wasn't very sure on the backing tune, felt a bit out of place.
Then the 2:07 to 2:22 bit was the fading - that I don't think was needed.
2:22 up to 2:52 was good, liked how that backing note from before came in and wasn't so dominant, fitted nicely in there.
From 2:52 onwards there was 2 omre parts to the song that felt dominant in the song to the very end, and I don't think they fit in at all. Changes the song to something new and it's not pleasent in my opinion.
Then from 4:15 you did the slowing down of the song to a crawl. I actually liked your previous songs that dropped off particular rhythms until the last main one was left, then ended.
Overall, a 7. It's not bad, has good parts and bad, could be improved. Your call.