YOU KICK ASS MAN
Seriously man, i didnt think the lip synching was that bad, the drawings were alot better than alot of others on newgrounds, loved your story, and for some reason, this flash- compared to thousands of others, feels like the one of the only flashes with heart in it, and doesnt have insanity.
So
Graphics: Kicked ass man, im not saying it was the best, but it wasn't nearly the worst, 8-9ish
Sound,- Loved the music, the voice actings were god, why do you say it was bad?? 9
Story- semmed almost completely original, it was funny too, yay for... pacman 10
Improvements: You need to draw Just a tiny tiny tiny bit better, and the raining part got kinda budget, i could see the raindrops on a wall so...
yuh, its 1:30 in the morning, and i NEED SLEEP so i guess ill end it here... ummm... bummer i missed the last scene, cuz when it got up to looking at the ad in the paper, my mouse screwed up and i went to the X and clicked,