Very nice, but a little too much drums.
This song is good, but there are some key things that i think could help it. The drums are the main element in the majority of the song, and i will admit, they did get a little annoying. But something that i did notice was that small prison siren-like noise. I feel if you had built off of that and gave it more emphasis it might have been better. When your dubstep kicked in, the drums ran much more smoothly and it sounded nice. These drums would have sounded exquisite with some serious support. Hope this helped.
P.S. : I really liked lost in translation and untitled.