Sigh
The graphics and all were nicely done, the animation was enough, but then you had to try and implement unfunny little endings. That gave me the assumption they were trying to be funny. I mean maybe next time before putting in all that work you should discuss your scenes/script with other people. The lame endings killed it for me.
Actually, I did discuss it with quite a few people before submitting. They all liked it =P
it was alright.
It was short. It wasn't the greatest drawing either. Truth be told, alot of it wasn't that funny. But, it was original, and there were some funny points (easter egg, or when yoshi finally breaks down the door). If it was longer, and those were the only funny parts, i would have given a worse score, but for the small amount of funny, was worth the small waste of time. I have faith you could do better. Prove me right!
Small sugjestion <-----(cant spell)
anyways, i liked all of your movies, good points and all, i also admire the fact that you took the time to draw your own yoshi instead of using a sprite, but please next time try and draw a little better. (dont eat me!)
*eats*
wow
alright bro i watched this cartoon and i serusly thought that it was not front page material but then i watched that easter egg thing and that was the first time i laffed at a cartoon in a long time so that changed your 2 to a 5
I laugh at fart jokes, but not this.
I like video game parodies, even ones that have stale old jokes. I prefer fresh ideas, but oh well.
This flash had original art and original jokes. The music went with the animation perfectly, wonderful job there.
However... jesus christ that was not funny at all.
The first two segments were so slow, and when it finally got to the joke it was... disappointing. All that time spent watching for... what?
The third segment was fairly good as far as mario game fight scenes go. That part HAS been played out a bit, even if it was yoshi doing the thrashing. But the end... probably the funniest joke of the entire series, but thats not too high a cliff to climb.
You got potential, but a second opinion on your script would surely help.
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