Awesome!
I love the song; There is nothing entirely necessary that needs to be criticized negatively; My only concern is how the "introduction" is a tad long compared to the rest of the song.
The melody flows nicely, and you, mate, have achieved your goal;
And for that, I congratulate you.
-Hardball-
P.S.; If you're sick of the zero-bombers, you just got yourself quite a few daily "5" voters!