okay
Well, it's very like Obnoxius2, which came out recently, so if you you did start this 'a few months ago' then it's just an unfortunate coincidence on your part. There were too much endorsements at the start. Gamers want to get straight into the action and waiting will most likely lower your score. Also, make the frame rate much higher.
Copied game, but worse.
Copied http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /398936 , but not even done so well.
Think of your own ideas.
eh, it's ok
First of all there where way to many adds in the beginning. Other then that it was ok but gets old after a while.
Change the frame rate.
When making games or animations, you should change the frame rate (located in the properties window) to something higher than 12, like 24. Otherwise, it doesn't look very good. Not a bad idea, though, even though it's been done before. Keep trying. ;)
Unoriginal
You stole the idea from Obnoxius2. I liked the binary code in the preloader.