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I liked your vicious attempt and character movements and fbf. You really liked to exaggerate the squash and straighten movements, and the actually drawings and art were believable and not bad. My main complaint is that it wasn't exactly clean, nor smooth. If it were, it would be 100% better and a smaller brush size would do you wonders. You weren't consistent with your sizes either, it got of hand and make things looked bulking and shaking at times. But like I said it was a great vicious attempt I could tell you worked hard.
David