needs new voice acting
+ animation
+ sound effects
+ story
+ shit-faced joke
- horrible voice acting
- unpolished script
Voice acting and the script were the only things in the animation I was uncomfortable with... Like when the guy got pulled into the grave, or when he said "who am I kidding," it just didn't seem to fit the scene at all. Also the beginning dialogue in the room seemed a bit awkward. Also maybe if you had a second person doing the voice of the other guy, it wouldn't sound so much like one person doing both voices. :)
Besides that, good job, the things I like were listed above next to the +s. :)