Very Cool
I anxiously await episode 2 ^^
Reviews for "Thamesis - Episode 1"
Loved it!
It's like broken saints on (more?) acid! I love the way this drips with style and creativity.
Cool
that was cool Good Job!
Unique
The style is very different and look forward to your next submission
interesting stuff!
Very interesting art style, great sound design, and you make good use of the possibilities of animation for a graphic novel format.
However, and this may end up being a tediously repeated comment: the text disappears a bit fast most of the time. I notice this mostly when text appears in various places on screen and it takes a fraction of a second to focus on a different area (for instance near the end, when the prince has a conversation over the phone).
I'd recommend either lengthening the time text appears a little more, or indeed look into using voice actors to narrate things -- it's just another element you can take advantage of since it's presented in Flash form rather than on paper.