Not really that good a hook.
Very pretty, but you kinda need to start the story of a bit quicker in something that short. I didn't mind the speed of the text, I got is all pretty quick. I just think that there wasn't enough in that to keep people coming back to it.
Great!
I have not seen Broken Saints so I cannot judge this submission based on that. I must admit, it was refreshing to see someone create a digital comic. The music was incredible and your artwork is amazing. I was a bit taken back by the fact i was a digi-comic only because I havent seen one before. I can't wait for the third episode, and I truly hope this isn't one of those movies that die before they are complete.
i agree with prior posts
It certainly feels like "Broken Saints" but I think it might be more engaging, depending on where you go with it. Certainly, the style and pace is on par with that other great series. I might even say the pacing is better, thought I might comment that you have to read pretty fast in order to reaed everything that is written, while still internalizing all the visuals. I do, in fact, read pretty fast, too.
Artwork
I gotta say that your art work is so... fascinating. I love your story telling method and it kept me in the whole time. I was left on edge for the next part. Very awesome graphic design as well.
Good, but kind of familiar
I say familiar because it kind of feels like another "Broken Saints" kind of series, not that I have a problem with that, Im just saying that its a genre Im looking forward to seeing again. So keep up the good work and can't wait to see the next episode.