Pass, sorry
Just wasnt interesting for me. Seemed more like a test animation. You have talent, just do some research on making a short film. Something this short in time length the first 10 seconds the Character(s) have to show wants and needs. What are they willing to do to get what they want, and what happens when they cant get what they want is what makes the story interesting. Then add an ending other than a city in ruins. What the heck happens to them?