A very few improvement
Hi,
I remember the original one. A few more scenes has been added/deleted to this one such as the fall to hell.
The very good point (in the story) now is that we see what St-Pierre (St Peter in english) was reading to judge Corey. As far as I remember, these were reasons as a point of discordance in the first movie and you did great to imput this.
I don't see why you want to remove your ancient work even when the new one is better. I mean, it's a part of your flash technique growing and its interesting to see diffrences in it from the firs release to the latest.
The other way to go is to swap the movie. It's illegal if the movie doesn't fit, but for improvement there are no problems you can update it without submitting a new one.
The artwork you do is appreciable. You use a good match of high-quality pictures in teamwork with flash effects and graphics. The result is very interesting as only a few artists succeed to make something good to the eye with those 2 worlds.
Some effects were missing. To be accurate, when he sleeps, the baseball cap is a pic posted over the desktop. It doesn't looks like on a desk because of it's shape and no angle.
The sound was of very good quality, which explains possibly the major part of the 9.6 Mb the movie requires. It shouldn't be a problem to most users though. Musics selection could be different but they were very good from my point of view, considering as well it fit the movie. Voice actor was of high quality too.
The part with major lack is the interactivity. I know it's a movie but still has to get some. No replay button, no pause button and if the viewer pause it with the menu, the sounds keep going without the images (because the sound should stop too). Fix it by using the stream option on the sound property (layers -> frame -> property).
Overall it's a VERY good movie (I insist) but I consider it needs some little more work.
Well done!
AdmiraL-R