it was a pointless ramble.
background noise cut in and out like posted before. it didn't catch my attention on the point. you should have made the pople in the background do something besides just walk around....say for instance if it is club blood have a vampire stumbling over a dead body or someone running by with a chainsaw. make it more funnier. but good job on the lip sync. and drawings were decent. i would love to see more from you. just keep an eye on these problems.