err...
... was it to be random? cuz it wasnt. anyways, i understood it, but didnt really like it too much. nothing personal
err...
... was it to be random? cuz it wasnt. anyways, i understood it, but didnt really like it too much. nothing personal
yeah it was meant to be random :D
k thx for the rewiev
I guess it was a little funny.
Needs to be longer though, and the animation seriously looked chopped up. Also the voice acting wasn't too good. There needed to be more of a background too, Like when he went in through the door, the door just disappeared..
k il work on that, thx for the rewiev
Subtitles
Please, use punctuation and caps when needed...and all that. Not that big a deal, but just looks better, that's all.
As for the voices, they did remind me of Twin Peaks, in a way. The pauses between lines sounded odd, though.
Not bad.
thx, puncuation aint my thing but yeah il ad it in any other movies
Bizarre
It felt like there was something lacking, and I finally settled on missing reasons for their actions, apart from weird/random can be funny. I tried to figure a background for this story, and got this:
Similar to the Monty Python sketch where the man looking for an argument accidently enters the abuse room ("stupid git"), the job seeker enters a room where an alien is learning social skills so as to pass as human. ("You have subtitles here?"..."No, we have pie")
true, the story sucked and thnx for the rewiev
Random?
The animation feels like an attempt to create something random, but it has no cohesion. If you wre trying to create a prolonged awkward moment, you didn't quite reach it. The ambient sound in the background loops poorly. The voices were okay, but sounded staticy. You might also try backgrounds. Having your characters float in a void adds nothing to the flash.
right, better backgrounds and less random
thx for the rewiev