the manager
I thought Floating Manager was going to encapsulate the girl with a bulbous mass and suck her dry. The humm(o)er was too drawn out. Floating Manager should get his own series. bAka
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BaconMask responds:
Sweet, I am considering it now that I see some demand. The posibilities are many! Thanks man.
I can see the effort and ability, but...
There are quirks about your visual style that seem weird to me. I think you make the characters tween around too much when they're just talking or sitting there, and the mouth animation feels a little unnatural. In general, it feels like the characters are actually over-animated, which isn't something I usually say.
The movie also is uneasy for me with characters: Most/all of them are too weird or stupid to relate to, and the antagonist is just downright alienating. Maybe it's just me, but in general, it all made the movie feel too weird to actually be very funny.
With all that said, though, the movie is definitely over par.
BaconMask responds:
Tweening is like a seasoning, it's true. And this toon might be a touch overseasoned.
it was alright
You know, I even worked at a pizza place back in the day, but I still didn't find most of the jokes/gags to be very good. You could easily get rid of about half the temporary manager jokes and still have too many. Quality over quantity my friend. There are SO many funnier situations you can come up with , I'm sure. But production wise, everything was good.
BaconMask responds:
What can I say? Humor is a really subjective thing. There is no one type of humor that everyone likes. This happens to be the kind of thing I find funny. I'm sorry you didn't lol, but I am glad that you were able to give a constructive review. Thanks for watching!
It's so-so...
I just see a bunch of random humor, with only a few funny parts.. The graphics, on the other hand, are excellent.
So, work a bit on the humor. And remove the shit...
BaconMask responds:
Well... I kinda only write jokes one way, so if you don't find this funny... you may not be keen to my style. Which is cool. Thanks!
...woah...
Well this was certainly something different. It was pretty funny but it could get a bit drawn out and weird at times. But other than that, lol, it was definitely worth watching.
BaconMask responds:
Sweet, thanks a bunch for watching man!