Good animation
Very well animated and top quality art work. The sound was also pretty decent and the style is nice. The only reason it didn't get a 10 is simply because the story didn't really interest me as it progressed, and it all kind of came to nothing in the end. Maybe it was suppost to be funny but it didn't cut it for me. None the less nice work you have talent :)
thank you, i have been busy in my break from animation, writing decent stories for my next animation.
So next time i hope you will be happier! :)
Neat.
You got tonsa tallent.
Few things I'll say, but it's mainly opinion: Sisyphus's head....Too hairy. Hard to make out what his facial expressions at times.
The story. For the grand effort you put into, make sure it's a perfect story to ya. This one seemed too simple: Push rock, rock fall..push rock again. The hidden moral of never giving up is cool but a better story is required for your tallent.
The voices: They were okay-ish, but over-done. Coulda cut down a bit on it.
Music was great...Makes me curious if it's the same artist Phillips uses.
This is all opinion, whatever. Lookin' forward to your next submission.
Thank you, i do agree that his head is too hairy lol but by the time i realised it was making facial features hard to read at points i was too far into the animation to simply change it.lol
As for the music well, i did it actually i was taught by my dad who is a long time musician.
wow great work
lol its really funny in a childish way, great work, keep them coming
Thank you very very much! :D
Good job! Don't give up!
Very nicely done! The only thing I'd like to point out is probably that you need a bit more smooth animations, it felt a bit jerky at times, and better voices. Not that they were bad, the voices needed a bit more perfecting because it is a bit "noisy" you know?
Anyways, don't give up!
-Fae
Thank you, i couldn't level the voice volume properly because the file would then be too big to submit, i suggest just keep one hannd on the volume level because of a few parts in the movie :)
congrats
i liked a lot of the animation of brackend wood i saw and because this is your first flash animation i wanna tell you.. congrats you really did a nice work.. even getting the chance of get a good level as adam philip.. i hope he tell your opinion about your work. congrats again : D.
Thank you, but please will people stop seeing it as just a copy and just recognise it as an individual piece of work.