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^^Good Points^^
Well, I liked the music, and the background wasn't too bad. Actually looked kind of nice. A decent effort here.
^^Needs Improving^^
I guess there are a lot worse on Clock Day, but I've seen dance party done so many times before. In fact, I almost did it last year ;) Regardless, you could have maybe added a few more clocks here. Just Rupee and SBC doesn't make such a hot party.
Thanks, I could of added more clocks. But Rupee and SBC were the only clocks I had already drew. Apparently im to lazy to draw clocks.
It's old.
Pros
-SBC can dance and so can Rupee.
-Nice song
Cons
-Graphics are not all that good.
-Jokes old.
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Heh, okay.
Well I guess you showed that both of these fine clock characters could actually dance, but that's really the only thing to it. It would have been nice to have a big "Happy clock day" thing right across the middle or something, but the submission itself did the job pretty fine as it is. The music was cool, but that really was the only good thing about this, lol.
Thanks
Not too special.
Just a simple little dance with an upside down spin by Strawberry Clock,not the great of detail for the character design either and pretty simple background too,it could have been a lot better.
Could have
Very Basic Loop
I'm not impressed with this submission at all. The music really is the only endearing part of the flash, while the loop looks like something that you spent very little time preparing.
I've come to expect more from you, as you have proven that you can animate, but this looks like very little time and effort was put in, as you are safe in the knowledge of a high score, due to Clock Day.
I'm not picking on you, I just feel that more effort would be called for.
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