Volume Control
This would have been way better if you knew how to volume control. Then it may have been a five.
Reviews for "World of Warcraft Hentai!"
WOAH!
THERES HOULD BE AN ACHIVEMENT OF WATCHING THIS WHOLE VIDEO! Again as the other person said "stupid Horde"
How shall I put it?
It needs work. A lot or it. The kid was basically screaming at his parents, and you couldn't turn up the volume without hearing the kid scream into the mic and basically destroy your speakers. Unfortunately, because of that, you can't follow the dialogue at all. It sounded like the parents were trying to get their kid off the computer so he could get some sleep because he had a lacrosse game the next day or something and he basically threw a fit because he didn't want to. But like I said I could hardly hear anything over the kid screaming into his mic.
Then there's the animation. When the mom and dad actually walked (slid?) into the room there was some decent animation, but the talking needs work. there's more to it than just making their jaw spaz out.
I'm sorry to say but this was just awful.
If you are looking for talent... go somewere else
The sad part is that i actually had to force myself to finish watching this to give a honest review. so i came up with a few pointers.
1 > make sure that your title is appropriate for the animation. this is not hentai... so don't call it that.
2 > work on your sound quality. it is sad to say that the intro before the vid was the only thing that could be heard clearly. the voice acting was so terrible that i actually couldn't understand most of what was said.
3 > animation.... when there are voice acting parts make sure to dub them. this requires more effort than you were apparently willing to put out. try making your characters move verses just alternating between two pics. want help look up tweening in your flash tutorial.
4 > scripting... judging by what i could hear. your scripting talents are nil. one of the best methods i have found in creating a good script is actually to "throw your ideas around" "get feed-back" Before you start your project. odds are you will get a good idea if people will accept your "storyline" before you start your project.
Honestly overall the intro was the only good part of this animation. the rest was worse than a disappointment.
This was absolutely terrible
I cannot believe that this somehow survived. I hate new ground fags who ask their friends to vote 5 on their crappy vidoes and shit like this survives. This sucks, and so does your ability to be funny.