Sweet stuff!
I like this alot. Especially the crash. The song overall is overblowing the sound buffer, so mastering would be the problem. Your percs need some work, but overall you've got a decent sound. Lovin it man. Check out some of my stuff. I love the synth/melody that comes in. Great, try to make your breakbeat more full. Once again, this all would sound so much more crisp and great if you do some mastering. Good luck!
Enjoying this!
-WV-