Reviews for Lithorph - TheLastOne

[BlcK3gl3X]

Love it

This song helps me in the morning when I have to walk like a mile to class. Can't stop listening. xD I check in often to see if you put out anything new because your work is some of my fav. 5/5 as always ^.^ It is upbeat and catchy with a great tune. I liked the transition into and out of the vocals and enjoyed the vocals themselves, but something with the timing inside the vocal segment almost feels off. I can't seem to place it into words. It is so minimal it may not warrant any change because as previously stated, the piece as a whole is 10/10 5/5 in my opinion.

Lithorph responds:

Thanks alot dude, really means alot!
Yes the vocals are off on some places, and my friend jocke is fixing it.
But i probably wont work more on this though, but i will make more songs, im working on some stuff atm, but nothing complete yet.
Thanks again!

[Denn-C]

Sick!

u got way better since the last time i heard you! Where can i find you, and add me on msn, i'd like to collab with ye some time if u want!:)
ask msn in private message if u want it;)

Im on FB too, search for Dennis Clement

u really got this master blaster kinda music here, awesome work man, great mixing!

hope to hear from you!

Denn-C

Lithorph responds:

Thanks dude :)
Yeah i hope i've improved.
As i am busy at the moment with some collabs and stuff i dont think i can right now.
But i will add you later and we'll talk more into this matter :D

Thanks for your awesome review!

Lith

[VelociD]

Good

The first thing I noted, was that the bass doesn't quite fit the track.
I'm not that deep into HandsUp production, but maybe add some distortion to add some mid and high-end frequencies.

Also the transition at 0:45 is kinda abrupt.
The vocals sound dry and unprocessed.

Other than that, very nice.
I really like the Lead and the melodies.

4/5
8/10

4.34 / 5.00 (- 0.024)

Lithorph responds:

Well thank you for your review dude.
The bass is a pitchbass, very typhical for this kind of music, but i added a "basshelper" to make it more distorted, it usually squeeks more.
I also added a chord progression that is supposed to fill out the off-beat part of the song, maybe i added to much seperation to that part.
The transition is dry.
The piano i added could fit the vocals a little better.
But i like the cleanness of my vocal, to then later be followed by an "autotuned" part to fill it out more.
But ill improve and my next song will be better :P
Thanks!

[kingdragon]

It's pretty good, for dance that is

I normally don't like the Dance genre, but I have to say i rather enjoy this song. It's upbeat with out being super crazy happy (That's just annoying). The notes work really well together and the vocals just do wonders with the tune. The only thing I don't like is the length it feels short and I think it would be better as an actual song, but it works so well that the short time it's played doesn't really take away from the quality. "I don't need to fantasize", this is an excellent song and deserves lots of high votes and good reviews. A job well done, I'll be looking for more from you so I do hope you stay here on newgrounds, if you don't then maybe help me find where you might post new music, if you do that is.

Lithorph responds:

Thank you for your review, you might acually be the one that made me stay here.
I was just pissed for so many reasons, but i love your review, you really took some time and listened to the whole song and made a review that didn't only boost my mood, but you also gave me some constructive critisism, and i love that.
I might do an extended verision, but thats only if more people wants that.
I will make more music, and in february my good friend Jocke will get his new computer, and we'll do some collabs.
Thanks again,
When you read this, please vote a 5 again, i wanna get it up so people can acually see it :/

[MaelouX]

your last shot ?

What the prob ?
Very good composition however ;) just too short maybe...

Lithorph responds:

Sorry my response was really rude, thanks for your review.