Iagree the text and 'voices' let it all down
It wasn't that bad a concept but then the bubles and voices at the end ruined it. You need to check your text before releasing this kind of stuff as it's embarassing. especially the one contected to the red bullet scene
Painful to read.
I found the actual animation reasonably entertaining but the English was the worst I have seen in a Newgrounds animation. I have heard 2 year olds construct better sentences. One of the speech bubbles made no sense at all.
I liked it.
Good blend of action/diologue, it was fairly entertaining.
hmm
yu-yu ??? yo-yo
Nothing wrong with stick figure fighting
Always been a big fan of stick figure action. For the next episode less talking, more fighting.