not bad
it was pretty good, but what did it have to do with mario? i mean he doesn't appear once in the whole thing. other then that though, it was alright.
Reviews for "Halo Random!"
Ummm
It was okay. Just there was no point and it had nothing to do with mario. Also, next time - spend a little more time and erase the black out of the sprites. I liked the animation.
...Mario?
I fail to see the connetion with Mario. Are you generalizing all sprites simply as.. Mario? Oh well. But it's sprites, not mario.
How clever of you to use a black background to hide the fact that you haven't cut out the sprites. Just trace bitmap, and the annoying background can be removed alot easier.
Horrible voice acting along with pointless sound effects is not instant win. Use sounds that actually sound good, and don't use your voice if you can't act worth a thing.
Increase the framerate. I can't think of a single movie that i've found to be good with a framerate of less than 24. And finally, don't use sprites unless you know what you're doing. have patience, practice at animating and maybe soon you will have a flash that the audience will like. Until then, don't feed the portal with 1.5 - 2.0 movies. Thanks you.
Good luck though.
~ Frost
My 2ยข
1. What does this have to do with mario?
2. The black boxes are driving me crazy. Use the lasso -> magic wand in flash to get rid of those.
3. I didn't see any plot.
4. It would've made more sense if none of them spoke (except the grunts, those were alright).
5. It was way too short.
ummm
crap, had nothing to do with mario, and had no story or anything. it was just boring sorry. i hope if u make a next flash, it will be alot better