it was ok
i see potential in this piece, but i fail to see why the score is this high.
the animation is pretty bad, and so is character design.
my advice would be to practice your art and when you are better make more. you arent gonna get anywhere putting out stuff like this.
this was in no way meant to insult or put you down.
Good luck in the future with youwr work.
I can stomach the character design not being satisfactory (the one guy is just in jeans and a shirt).
But whats the beef with the animation? Whats so bad about it? Parts of this animation can easily rival some of animation are done well enough to be better/as good as stuff in the top 50.
In short, what, in particular, is wrong with the animation?
Good job
Well drawn, well animated, nice music... But i think i'm over anime style people and... things jumping in the air shooting fire at each other in a crazy frenzy with no meaning. Fair enough you're going to explain it in a later episode, but maybe have a hint of what's going on in the same flash. Just a thought. Good flash though.