hey pretty good! your getting there!
since this is your debut its really good! (better than half the crap that floats its way onto newgrounds) yet you still need some work, id up the frame rate and add a couple more sprite files, (also when you publish the flash id improme the jpeg quality)
all in all great!
3/5
nice... for a first flash.
Most of these first flashes i see i usualy blam but hey. this accualy is half decent. you could have done better witht he sprites but hey. good job. hope to see another submission and it'll probebly be better.
Yeah, this time the graphics on the sprites were poor, but hey, I can do better next time can't I? Also, u said "but hey" twice, but hey, I... ummm... Alright, I'll stop.
wow
Good as a first one, menu needs a little pimp out but however 4 - 9 for ya
First off.
1. The audio was of horrible quality, it almost blew my speakers.
2. Don't suggest at all ever for what other people shold vote. ( You don't have to vote 5; 3 will do) Dude. You just never say that. That is what makes people blam your bumissions. I voted 4 personally becasue it wasn't that bad. But dude.
Higer frames rate to smoothen it out. And download the MP3 you are gonna use for the music, DO NOT RECORD IT OFF THE TV liek you did. That was just wrong on so many levels.
Pretty good.
Yeah, pretty good.
Sprites were done well.
The problem i have is that the hand-drawn stuff was rubbish.
Other than that, pretty good.