Very Nice.
Good job. This is incredibly good for a first timer. Practice a bit and you could become one of the better flash artists on NG. You have real potential.
Very Nice.
Good job. This is incredibly good for a first timer. Practice a bit and you could become one of the better flash artists on NG. You have real potential.
needs more sounds
not enough sounds it was a little bit silent use a sound for when the words SWOOP in and try to somehow time the sounds to blend in thats wat would make it better
I don't know...
I Kind of liked it.
Huh...
That was really not all that bad for a first submission. Keep up the good work.
Surprisingly good
The beginning didn't seem to promise much but this turned out to be a surprisingly good flash. A lot of the ideas weren't exactly original but they all worked well for the final goal of reaching home. 6/10 stars.