Okay as far as Ren & Stimpy style goes...
It's cool that you got commissioned for it, but I guess I never saw much in this particular style. I don't know if it was deliberate, but it felt like the timing just wasn't right in a few places.
It also really felt like it just ended right in the middle of things without really having a reason for ending other than "We've hit the 50 second mark, lets wrap it up so we have time for credits"
It looks technically professional, but I just generally wasn't impressed.