Ha--
A quick laugh, indeed.
Since it was intentionally short, I'll not bash on and on about its length, but it was too cliche. Nevertheless, it's a funny cliche.
Ha--
A quick laugh, indeed.
Since it was intentionally short, I'll not bash on and on about its length, but it was too cliche. Nevertheless, it's a funny cliche.
haha
I thought it was pretty funny, but that you should also make some kind of real animation out of it, instead of a simple short. make it longer and give it a storyline and i'm sure you will get some real good feedback
your right the laugh was quick
theres nothing wrong with this except the gag has been done to many times to be funny any more. thats my view anyway. id encourage you to do more but make hem more original
it was ok
but havent we all seen that joke before? i'd suggest a big plot about having to save someone and then while he is talking being slamed into the wall then say somesthing like "...aww shit..." and i'd suggest making it longer.
well
It made me laugh a TINY bit