Almost perfect.
For a flash like this, you really couldn't add much better animation, it would take away from the story. While the voice acting was the perfect level of funny and annoying, it was a little scratchy and hard to hear in a lot of parts. The "snake" in the trouser jokes were funny. Tom Fulp is your supreme ruler and commander, but the part where he dies is funny. I can only imagine what will happen when they take over. I am very surprised you did this in only 4 days. The Newground's "Fortress" is interesting. That probably IS where Tom Fulp lives. But what about Wade Fulp? Wouldn't Tom want his brother to take over? Not some random animators? It didn't really have a set storyline, as can be seen by the ninjas, which is usually a bad thing, but it's unusually funny in these cases. Hope this passes and you make another one!