Average
Not bad, although the grammar could be better.
Average
Not bad, although the grammar could be better.
good start
its a good start but instead of buttons you should make it change sceens on it own after a few seconds, especially when there is so little to read.
pretty good
that was pretty good for your first flash, but next time try to point with the subtitles who's talking and make it more understandable.
Good (I think)
The story need more elaboration and the sprites too but other than that the idea is good, keep it, hope you become better at flash
Hmm...
You are a begginer, so i encourage you to train your skills more, try making movies not related to sprites, because making sprite movies is way too easy and does not describe your true skills.
The movement was 2/2, as i said, you just need to give it more guts.