You did put effort into this, but...
Work on everything. Animation, brush, art etc. Clean up the brush drawings and lose the spinning text (which got really annoying). You have the ideas, just work on the presentation.
Reviews for "the reaper movie"
Interesting, but needs work!
Need to work on how you tell ya story.
Needs sound(s) (like scream and such every now and again even if its not going with what going on, but it will add some effect and edge to the whole "Reaper").
Interesting, but needs work.
Learn from it and will see how ya do on ya next one.
Better than smoking crack!
I have got to tell yah! I am a 13k'er and out of all, this one is pretty amazing!! How did you make that preloader if so kind enough to ask?
Ps- Im not a nerd, but besides that: Overall 10/10 nice flash! (Graphics were stunning!)
hyperkiller10 responds:
you get the preloader from this site! just scroll to the bottom of the page and click on ng arsenal. they have a whole section on preloaders. this one's called turret( for obvious reasons