Reviews for Fanny Flannel

[clockwork-kubrick]

Very fun, but not perfect

Very enjoyable. The best part was the cockney's rant, which was near par with a good Monty Python skit.

That said, you need to work on pacing.

Example 1: The song the geek was singing at the begining was so painful I nearly stop watching (glad I did keep watching, though). It adds absolutely nothing to the cartoon and perhaps is the least entertaining moment in it.

Example 2: Too much dead space. By that I mean moments where the action in the particular shot has already taken place (or the character has finished talking), you stay on the shot for several seconds before cutting. An example would be how long it takes to cut after the cockney's rant; wouldn't it be more effective if the audio is timed to finish as he disapears off screen?

But really good job on this. I laughed aloud.

OscarBaldwinStudio responds:

Thanks for the constructive criticisms. I think I'm improving now though. Check out my youtube channel and let me know what you think. Please subscribe if you like it :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z3NbqDgq-rA

[Onion-fusioN]

Wasn't "strange"

That was really good. The part where the main guy throws the flannel into the bush was really well animated.

OscarBaldwinStudio responds:

Thanks. I kinda cheated on that bit. Filmed myself doing the movement and then traced it. I've used it a bit on my new toons too. Subscribe if ya like :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z3NbqDgq-rA

[laserman]

Yay

this was totally the by far best drawn animation in the treasure hunt, also the secret was pwnage ^^

OscarBaldwinStudio responds:

Thanks very much. Rather belated I know lol :P Please follow me on youtube cos i'm gonna be uploading new toons every 2 weeks soon :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z3NbqDgq-rA

[ThePantherX12]

Deightfully amusing

Not What i' really cool Brit/English humour as stated on the front page , but funny none the less , the cockney was for sure the funniest, the lad with glasses not so much .

OscarBaldwinStudio responds:

hmm, yeah, he's not gonna be the most popular character in a cartoon i'd say. I kinda like rejects though. They're cool. Check out my youtube channel if ya want. You can subscribe if you like my toons :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z3NbqDgq-rA

[amplicqu]

unusual ending

Sort of dug its weirdness until the meat beating at the end from the cockney. That just wasn't right, though the flannel love wasn't either, at least it was a CLEAN love. Funny.

OscarBaldwinStudio responds:

haha. Yeah. it is a tad odd. I like making up cartoons as I go along and just getting gradually more weird. Check out my youtube channel and subscribe if ya like. I'm uploading a new cartoon this week :) It's similar to this one in oddness https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z3NbqDgq-rA