Not Exactly Black Humor...Way to subtle
Spikey haired boy, spouts some gibberish about being nice then walks away. In an apparently unrelated incident, vulture flys by. Ohhhhhh-kay...
This one is weird because it looks like you put a lot of effor into drawing the main character and producing the sound. How come everything else looks so half done? What are those lines on the ground supposed to be? Is he supposed to be in the desert? What happend to the sky? I know when you previewed this you heard the garbled "Follow me" line. It comes all smashed in with the line before it. But most of this would be completely forgivable if your flash had a strong gag... But it doesn't. There is nothing here connected enough to be humorous.
Well, you gave it a good try, anyways. Just work getting your gag down first and foremost. Then build around that.
-everything_is_easy