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Reviews for "'`Beautiful World'`"

Decent-o

The beggning needs some Cello Harmonics. The drums need to be a bit more "Epic'', they remind me of a Yamaha Midi Piano drumset (meaning not so great quality), there is no really "climax" in this peice, which is what most songs of this stature has. There is buildup no doubt, but it goes "lolno" to the climax.

Naerbu responds:

lmao "lolno"

Thanks for the review!

I'll see about including the cello harmonics (if I can find any) :)

Good

There were a few problems like there was no real climax in the piece like there should be in any instrumental piece it was just kinda mellow and soft throughout and oyu don't want that. what you want is ist to be mellow and quiet and then wither gradually or suddenly become more massive and loud but good work

Naerbu responds:

Thanks KrobbleGoo,

I'll be sure to keep that in mind :)